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Black Dwarf: Earth-PC1/PC2

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BLACK DWARF
PL10


OPL: 10; SPL: 6; DPL: 10; FWPL: 10; HP: 1
Real Name: Black Dwarf
Age: Unknown
Height: 7-6
Weight: 650
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: None
Skin: Orange
Race: Unknown
Identity: Public
Alignment: Villain
Status: Active
Occupation: Warrior
Base of Operations: The Black Quadrant
Team Affiliations: The Black Order

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 12, STAMINA 12, AGILITY 2, DEXTERITY 2, FIGHTING 6, INTELLECT 2, AWARENESS 2, PRESENCE 0

SKILLS: Athletics 5 (+16), Close Combat [Unarmed] 2 (+8), Deception (+0), Insight 3 (+5), Intimidation 11 (+11/+12), Perception 3 (+5), Persuasion (+0), Ranged Combat [Throwing] 5 (+7), Stealth (+1/-1)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Chokehold, Diehard, Fast Grab, Great Endurance, Improved Grab, Interpose, Power Attack, Takedown (1), Trance

POWERS:
Black Dwarf Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Black Dwarf Mass: Feature 2 (Increased Mass 2); 2 pts
Unbreakable Skin: Protection 2, Impervious Toughness 13, Immunity 6 (All Environmental, Pressure); 21 pts
Groundstrike: Line Area Force Damage 10 (Extras: Line Area x2 [60 ft], Flaws: Distracting, Limited [Black Dwarf must be on the ground, targets must be on the ground]); 10 pts
Black Dwarf Weapons: 15 pt Array, Easily Removable (-6 pts); 10 pts
Big Axe: Slashing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Penetrating 10, Reach [5 ft], Smashing); 15 pts
Big Mace: Bludgeoning Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Penetrating 10, Reach [5 ft], Smashing); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +1
Close Attack +6 [Axe +14, Critical 19-20; Mace +14, Critical 19-20]
Unarmed +8 [Unarmed +12]
Ranged Attack +2
Throwing +7
Special Attacks [Groundstrike +10, Line Area]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +5 [DC15] Parry +6 [DC16]
Toughness +14 (+7 Impervious), Fortitude +14, Will +5

COMPLICATIONS:
Relationships: His brother, Corvus Glaive.
Responsibility: To Thanos.

Abilities 68 + Skills 14 (28 ranks) + Advantages 10 + Powers 48 + Defenses 10 = 150 / 150

Build Comments: Black Dwarf was a stretch to 150 pts but I don't think I overpowered him too much.
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Black Dwarf: Earth-J217

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Black Dwarf: Earth-???

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Black Dwarf: Earth-???

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Proxima Midnight: Earth-T1

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In the name of death! In the name of sorrow! In the name of chaos and war! In the name of Thanos! HUNT AND KILL! - Proxima Midnight

PROXIMA MIDNIGHT
PL13


OPL: 13; SPL: 8; DPL: 13; FWPL: 9; HP: 1
Real Name: Proxima Midnight
Age: Unknown
Height: 6-3
Weight: 175
Eyes: White
Hair: Blue
Skin: Blue
Race: Unknown
Identity: Public
Alignment: Villain
Status: Active
Occupation: Warrior
Base of Operations: The Black Quadrant
Team Affiliations: The Black Order

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 10, STAMINA 9, AGILITY 6, DEXTERITY 6, FIGHTING 11, INTELLECT 1, AWARENESS 4, PRESENCE 2

SKILLS: Acrobatics 7 (+13), Athletics 7 (+17), Close Combat [Unarmed] 3 (+16), Deception (+2), Expertise [Tactics] 9 (+10), Insight 8 (+12) [Assessment, Combat Clarity], Intimidation 7 (+9), Perception 5 (+9), Persuasion (+2), Stealth (+6)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack (3) (Spear Strike, Spear Thrown, Unarmed), Assessment, Close Attack (1), Combat Clarity* (1), Fearless, Great Endurance, Improved Critical (2) (Spear, Unarmed), Improved Initiative (2), Improved Smash, Move-by Action, Power Attack (3) (Spear Strike, Spear Thrown, Unarmed), Ranged Attack (6), Takedown (2), Ultimate Effort (1) (Toughness Check), Uncanny Dodge

POWERS:
Warrior's Physique: Protection 2, Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds), Speed 3 (16 mph/250 fpr), Leaping 3 (60 ft); 10 pts
Body Armor: 9 pt Traits, Removable (-2 pts); 7 pts
Armor: Protection 2, Impervious Toughness 7; 9 pts
Midnight Spear: 61 pts Traits, Easily Removable (-24 pts); 37 pts
Spear Mastery: Enhanced Dodge 2 (Flaw: Sustained), Enhanced Parry 2 (Flaw: Sustained); 4 pts
Spear Attacks: 55 pt Array; 57 pts
Black Star Snare: Ranged Progressive Affliction 19 (Black Star Matter; Resisted by Dodge, Overcome by Strength/Damage, 1st: Hindered and Vulnerable, 2nd: Defenseless and Immobilized; Extra: Extra Condition, Flaw: Inaccurate 2, Limited to two Degrees, Uncontrolled); 55 pts
Thrown Spear: Ranged Piercing Damage 13 (Extra: Affects Insubstantial 2, Dangerous, Homing 3, Penetrating 10); 1 pt
Spear Strike: Piercing Strength-based Damage 3 (Extra: Dangerous, Penetrating 10, Reach [5 ft]); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +14
Close Attack +13 [Spear Strike +13, Critical 18-20]
Unarmed +16 [Unarmed +10, Critical 19-20]
Ranged Attack +13 [Midnight Spear +13, Critical 18-20]
Midnight Cage +7 [Midnight Snare Affliction +19]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +11 (+13 with Midnight Spear) [DC21/23] Parry +11 (+13 with Midnight Spear) [DC21/23]
Toughness +13 (+4 Impervious, Ultimate Effort), Fortitude +12, Will +8

COMPLICATIONS:
Motivation: Combat and killing.
Relationships: Her husband, Corvus Glaive.
Responsibility: To Thanos.

Abilities 98 + Skills 23 (46 ranks) + Advantages 28 + Powers 55 + Defenses 12 = 216 / 216

Build Comments: Promixa Midnight is without a doubt the best fighter of the Order. That being said, I think her PL is probably a bit high as is Corvus' and Black Dwarf's. But I wanted the Order to be a challenge for an Avengers level team. Plus I think she would be a decent match for Diana,
which I need.

Secret Origins/The Story so Far/Characterization: Proxima Midnight is one of Thanos' lieutenants in the Black Order. She is the greatest warrior in all of Thanos' army. She has great physical power and ability.

Her spear when thrown transforms into three tracers of black light that never miss. The beams are lethal to most creatures.

Friends and Foes: She is the wife of Corvus Glaive and fiercely loyal to Thanos.
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Proxima Midnight: Earth-PC1

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In the name of death! In the name of sorrow! In the name of chaos and war! In the name of Thanos! HUNT AND KILL! - Proxima Midnight

PROXIMA MIDNIGHT
PL10


OPL: 10; SPL: 3; DPL: 10; FWPL: 8; HP: 1

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 8, STAMINA 8, AGILITY 6, DEXTERITY 2, FIGHTING 10, INTELLECT 1, AWARENESS 4, PRESENCE 0

SKILLS: Acrobatics 5 (+11), Athletics 5 (+13), Close Combat [Unarmed] 2 (+12), Deception (+0), Expertise [Tactics] 9 (+10), Insight 9 (+13) [Assessment], Intimidation 7 (+7), Perception 4 (+7), Persuasion (+0), Ranged Combat [Thrown Spear] 8 (+10), Stealth 3 (+9)

ADVANTAGES: Accurate Attack, All-Out Attack, Assessment, Defensive Attack, Diehard, Equipment (1), Fearless, Great Endurance, Improved Critical (3) (Spear 2, Unarmed), Improved Initiative (2), Improved Smash, Move-by Action, Power Attack, Takedown (2), Ultimate Effort (1) (Toughness Check), Uncanny Dodge

POWERS:
Warrior's Physique: Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds), Speed 2 (8 mph/120 fpr), Leaping 3 (60 ft); 7 pts
Midnight Spear: 17 pts Traits, Easily Removable (-6 pts); 11 pts
Spear Attacks: 16 pt Array; 17 pts
Thrown Spear: Ranged Strength-based Piercing Damage 2 (Extra: Affects Insubstantial 2, Dangerous 2, Penetrating 7, Homing 3); 16 pts
Spear Strike: Piercing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous 2, Penetrating 7, Reach [5 ft]); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
(5 pts)
Body Armor: Protection 2; 2 pts

OFFENSE:
Initiative +14
Close Attack +10 [Spear Strike +10, Critical 16-20]
Unarmed +12 [Unarmed +8, Critical 19-20]
Ranged Attack +2
Midnight Spear Thrown +10 [Midnight Spear +10, Critical 16-20]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +10 [DC20] Parry +10 [DC20]
Toughness +10 (Ultimate Effort), Fortitude +8, Will +8

COMPLICATIONS:
Motivation: Combat and killing.
Relationships: Her husband, Corvus Glaive.
Responsibility: To Thanos.

Abilities 78 + Skills 26 (52 ranks) + Advantages 20 + Powers 18 + Defenses 8 = 150 / 150

Build Comments: Promixa as a PC is still scary. She can manipulate all her offensive caps and her Spear is wicked.
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Proxima Midnight: Earth-PC2

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Proxima Midnight: Earth-J217

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Proxima Midnight: Earth-???

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Black Swan: Earth-T1

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Empires have collapsed. Kings have fallen. Men have perished. Worlds have ended... and that's just the beginning... everything dies. - Black Swan

BLACK SWAN
PL11


OPL: 11; SPL: 3; DPL: 11; FWPL: 9; HP: 1
Real Name: Yabbat Ummon Turru
Age: Unknown
Height: 5-11
Weight: 145
Eyes: Black/Red
Hair: White
Skin: White
Race: Human Mutate
Identity: Secret
Alignment: Villain
Status: Active
Occupation: Adventurer; Herald
Base of Operations: The Black Quadrant
Team Affiliations: The Cull Obsidian

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 10, STAMINA 10, AGILITY 4, DEXTERITY 4, FIGHTING 10, INTELLECT 5, AWARENESS 3, PRESENCE 2

SKILLS: Athletics (+10), Close Combat [Unarmed] 2 (+12), Deception 6 (+8), Expertise [Multiverse] 7 (+12), Insight 5 (+8), Intimidation 5 (+7), Perception 7 (+10), Persuasion (+2), Stealth (+4), Technology 10 (+15)

ADVANTAGES: Diehard, Ranged Attack (6)

POWERS:
Projected Display: Feature 1 (You can create small, simple, and fairly obvious visual images suitable for displaying information, the equivalent of showing 3-D pictures);1 pt
Multiversal Traveler: Comprehend 3 (Speak, Read, Understand all Languages); 3 pts
Incursion Sense: Senses 4 (Dimensional Awareness [Mental, Visual], Acute, Analytical); 6 pts
Flight of the Swan: Flight 7 (250 mph/1/2 mpr); 14 pts
Black Swan Powers: 24 pt Array; 25 pts
Energy Blasts: Ranged Cosmic Energy Damage 12; 24 pts
Telepathy: Communication 2 (Mental, 1 Mile); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +4
Close Attack +10
Unarmed +12 [Unarmed +10]
Ranged Attack +10 [Energy Blasts +12]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +11 [DC21] Parry +12 [DC22]
Toughness +10 (+10 without Defensive Roll), Fortitude +10, Will +9

COMPLICATIONS:
Hatred: Because of her prior experiences with the dark priests who wanted to destroy her world, she has a hatred for mages.
Relationships: She has found kinship with the other members of the Black Order.
Responsibility: To serve Rabum Alal, the great destroyer. Or Thanos. Or the Grandmaster. Or whoever she has decided to follow.

Abilities 96 + Skills 21 (42 ranks) + Advantages 7 + Powers 49 + Defenses 15 = 188 / 188

Build Comments: Black Swan first appeared during Jonathan Hickman’s Infinity series a few years back as a cryptic speaking harbinger of Incursions. She eventually became part of Thanos’ Cabal then a member of The Black Order, replacing the deceased (and underwhelming) Supergiant.

She was actually pretty decent in The Black Order limited series, getting some good one liners and showing a more consistent flying brick powerset. Overall, her powers are pretty ill defined so I just did what I’ve seen.

Secret Origins: Yabbat Ummon Tarru was a princess on Earth-T365 and became its lone survivor. When she was four years old, her earth was involved in an incursion event, where two universes are colliding with each other at the focal point of their Earths. A race of beings called Black Priests came from the parallel Earth, intent on destroying her Earth to save their own universe and killing anyone who stood in their way. She fled into the Library of Worlds, a way station of the multiverse. There she was met by three Black Swans (female beings each of a different appearance) who took her in and raised her to be a Black Swan.

The Story so Far: This new Black Swan came to Earth-T1 when it experienced its first incursion event. She was intent on destroying Earth in order to save both universes involved in the incursion. She fails and is then captured by Black Panther and imprisoned below Necropolis, The City of the Dead in Wakanda. Mister Fantastic is chosen to interrogate the Black Swan. While she seems cold and ruthless, she is seen via security camera weeping and crying out for help when sleeping. Though she is straightforward with her answers, they seem cryptic and like superstitious nonsense. She constantly warns that worse things are coming, and they need to prepare, but no matter what they do it's only delaying the inevitable because in the end everything dies. It was also revealed that Black Swan has a hatred toward Doctor Strange and magic users in general, being unwilling to tolerate Doctor Strange even talking to her, once he had told her he is a master of the mystic arts and the Sorcerer Supreme. This may be because her original Earth was destroyed by the Black Priests who appear to be magic users wearing helmets with one large eye on them, resembling the Eye of Agamotto.

She eventually agreed to help the Illuminati for a price, which is her own life, and in helping them, she helps herself for the moment. She gives them her history and the only method of permanently stopping incursions into their universe to destroy their Earth. As a sign of her good faith, she also gives them the scientific knowledge to make a device to forecast upcoming incursions, where as up until then, their technology could only detect incursions as they occur; her own such devices are implanted in her eyes. The Illuminati also reverse-engineer her anti-matter injection bomb, which they use to stop the next incursion. Black Swan is later placed in a cell where she has the Terrax of an alternate Earth as a cellmate. Both of them form an alliance where they will use each other's talents for the coming days.

During the Infinity storyline, Thanos finds the Illuminati's base. While looking for the Infinity Gems, Thanos stumbles upon the cell of Black Swan and Terrax. When both of them ask for Thanos to free them in exchange for being one of his lieutenants, Thanos declined and left. Following the defeat of both Thanos and the Builders, Terrax later pointed to Thanos' cell where Black Swan sees that Black Order member Corvus Glaive is slowly reviving.

After Namor was kicked out of the Illuminati, he released Thanos, Proxima Midnight, Corvus Glaive, Black Swan, and Terrax in order to form his incarnation of the Cabal. They made plans to do what the Illuminati didn't want to do and that was destroy the worlds that were in the incursions.

They started destroying worlds that would be a threat to their Earth during the incursions. After they were trapped on another Earth, Black Swan and the rest of the Cabal worked with Maker into making a life-raft that would save them from the final incursion where it was deployed during the fight between both its inhabitants. Following the final incursion, Black Swan and the Cabal awoke in their life-raft when it landed on the patchwork planet called Battleworld.

After God Emperor Doom's defeat and the restoration of the Multiverse, Thanos later recruited Black Swan to join his second incarnation of the Black Order.
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Re: J-Mart: El Jaguar, Chitauri, Outriders, The Black Order

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I found it very amusing how quickly the Black Order went from a new team of supervillains to major Marvel characters. Most of the characters that feature in the MCU are decades old, but these freaks debuted just a few years before featuring so prominently in Infinity War and Endgame. They were also used extensively in the Guardians of the Galaxy animated series, though there they were based on their comics look as that was before the Avengers movies. I think it was because they were just so useful, being powerful, menacing and cool, able to give our heroes a good fight while keeping Thanos in reserve as the big bad for the climax.
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Re: J-Mart: El Jaguar, Chitauri, Outriders, The Black Order

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Gamebook wrote: Mon Nov 29, 2021 8:17 pm I found it very amusing how quickly the Black Order went from a new team of supervillains to major Marvel characters. Most of the characters that feature in the MCU are decades old, but these freaks debuted just a few years before featuring so prominently in Infinity War and Endgame. They were also used extensively in the Guardians of the Galaxy animated series, though there they were based on their comics look as that was before the Avengers movies. I think it was because they were just so useful, being powerful, menacing and cool, able to give our heroes a good fight while keeping Thanos in reserve as the big bad for the climax.
I think it also helped that they were total blank slates, and provided varied threats- some physical, some blast-based, some mental. So writers were unencumbered by history.
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Re: J-Mart: El Jaguar, Chitauri, Outriders, The Black Order

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Jabroniville wrote: Mon Nov 29, 2021 9:05 pm
Gamebook wrote: Mon Nov 29, 2021 8:17 pm I found it very amusing how quickly the Black Order went from a new team of supervillains to major Marvel characters. Most of the characters that feature in the MCU are decades old, but these freaks debuted just a few years before featuring so prominently in Infinity War and Endgame. They were also used extensively in the Guardians of the Galaxy animated series, though there they were based on their comics look as that was before the Avengers movies. I think it was because they were just so useful, being powerful, menacing and cool, able to give our heroes a good fight while keeping Thanos in reserve as the big bad for the climax.
I think it also helped that they were total blank slates, and provided varied threats- some physical, some blast-based, some mental. So writers were unencumbered by history.
And they have a very cinematic design. Nothing too complex design-wise and as Jab noted, a pretty basic powerset. Except for Maw and the switch to Telekinesis from his Black Tongues was an easy switch. I dug them from the jump so I was glad to see them get a push in the MCU.
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Black Swan: Earth-PC1/PC2

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You pity me? I pity you. Thinking you have some say in how all this ends. - Black Swan

BLACK SWAN
PL10


OPL: 10; SPL: 3; DPL: 10; FWPL: 8; HP: 1

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 10, STAMINA 8, AGILITY 4, DEXTERITY 0, FIGHTING 10, INTELLECT 4, AWARENESS 3, PRESENCE 0

SKILLS: Athletics (+10), Close Combat [Unarmed] 2 (+10), Deception 5 (+5), Expertise [Multiverse] 6 (+10), Insight 6 (+9), Intimidation 5 (+5), Perception 4 (+7), Persuasion (+0), Ranged Combat [Blast] 10 (+10), Stealth (+4), Technology 6 (+10)

ADVANTAGES: Defensive Roll (2), Diehard

POWERS:
Projected Display: Feature 1 (You can create small, simple, and fairly obvious visual images suitable for displaying information, the equivalent of showing 3-D pictures);1 pt
Multiversal Traveler: Comprehend 3 (Speak, Read, Understand all Languages); 3 pts
Flight of the Swan: Flight 6 (120 mph/1800 fpr); 12 pts
Black Swan Powers: 24 pt Array; 25 pts
Energy Blasts: Ranged Cosmic Energy Damage 10; 20 pts
Incursion Sense: Senses 4 (Dimensional Awareness [Mental, Visual], Acute, Analytical); 1 pt
Telepathy: Communication 2 (Mental, 1 Mile); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +4
Close Attack +8
Unarmed +10 [Unarmed +10]
Ranged Attack +10 [Energy Blasts +10]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +10 [DC20] Parry +10 [DC20]
Toughness +10 (+8 without Defensive Roll), Fortitude +8, Will +8

COMPLICATIONS:
Hatred: Because of her prior experiences with the dark priests who wanted to destroy her world, she has a hatred for mages.
Relationships: She has found kinship with the other members of the Black Order.
Responsibility: To serve Rabum Alal, the great destroyer. Or Thanos. Or the Grandmaster. Or whoever she has decided to follow.

Abilities 74 + Skills 22 (44 ranks) + Advantages 3 + Powers 38 + Defenses 13 = 150 / 150

Build Comments: Black Swan as a PC.
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