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tell us you have Razer coming in soon. :D
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catsi563 wrote: Mon Dec 12, 2022 8:37 pm tell us you have Razer coming in soon. :D
He's definitely on the list. The GL series was great and he was a big part of it. My current goal is to get at least 2-3 members of every Corps done first, then circle back later to add more members. He'll probably be in a later run as my initial Red Lanterns are already pretty much done and should start getting posted tonight or tomorrow.
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Thorpocalypse wrote: Tue Dec 13, 2022 3:02 am
catsi563 wrote: Mon Dec 12, 2022 8:37 pm tell us you have Razer coming in soon. :D
He's definitely on the list. The GL series was great and he was a big part of it. My current goal is to get at least 2-3 members of every Corps done first, then circle back later to add more members. He'll probably be in a later run as my initial Red Lanterns are already pretty much done and should start getting posted tonight or tomorrow.
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Red Lantern (Atrocitus): Earth-T1

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Pity is weak. Pity is failure. What is pity... compared WITH RAGE? - Atrocitus

RED LANTERN (ATROCITUS)
PL13


OPL: 13; SPL: 5; DPL: 13; FWPL: 13; HP: 1
Real Name: Atros
Age: Unknown
Height: 7-8
Weight: 500
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: None
Skin: Red
Race: Ryutian
Identity: Public
Alignment: Neutral
Status: Active
Occupation: Red Lantern Leader
Base of Operations: Ysmault
Team Affiliations: Red Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 10 [12], STAMINA 10 [12], AGILITY 2 [3], DEXTERITY 2, FIGHTING 10, INTELLECT 2, AWARENESS 3, PRESENCE 5

SKILLS: Athletics 3 (+15), Deception (+5), Expertise [Cosmic Lore] 8 (+10), Expertise [Magic] 8 (+10) [Ritualist], Insight (+3), Intimidation 10 (+15/+16), Perception (+3), Persuasion (+5), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 7 (+9), Stealth (+3/+1)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Benefit (1) (Status – Leader of the Red Lantern Corps), Close Attack (2), Diehard, Last Stand*, Leadership, Power Attack (4) (Burning Blood, Claws, Fires of Rage, Unarmed), Ritualist

POWERS:
Great Rage: Enhanced Fortitude 4 (Flaw: Limited to power ring effects); 2 pts
Atrocitus Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Claws: Slashing/Piercing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 4 pts
Iron Stomach: Feature 1 (Iron Stomach); 1 pt
Red Lantern Power Ring: 141 pts Traits, Removable (-28 pts); 113 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Red Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce total concealment to partial and partial concealment to none]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Fortitude [DC20 check] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 5 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 13 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 28 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds); 3 pts
Mind of Rage: Immunity 10 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited [half-effect]); 5 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (All power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 17 pts
Red Light of Rage: 34 pt Array; 38 pts
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 17; 34 pts
Rage Constructs: Create 17 (Hard Light Constructs); 1 pt
Burning Blood: Acid Damage 10 (Extras: Reach 3 [15 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 1 pt
Rage Infection: Perception Range Affliction 10 (Mental; 1st: Dazed, 2nd: Compelled, 3rd: Mentally Transformed [into being of rage]); 1 pt
Mass Communication: Communication 5 (Subspace audiovisual projection, Any Distance, Extra: Dynamic, Selective); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +3
Close Attack +12 [Unarmed +12; Claws +14, Critical 19-20; Burning Blood +10]
Ranged Attack +2
Power Ring +9 [Fires of Rage +17; Rage Constructs +17]
Special Attack [Rage Infection Affliction +10, Perception]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +8 [DC18] Parry +9 [DC19]
Toughness +12 (+12 without Defensive Roll, +17 with Force Field, +7 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +13 (+17 for Power Ring effects), Will +9

COMPLICATIONS:
Enemy: The Green Lantern Corps, but more the Guardians of the Universe themselves. He also has a hatred of Sinestro as well as the Manhunters.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. Unlike his fellow Red Lanterns, Atrocitus seems immune to the ring’s tendency to inspire mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects, not that Atrocitus seems to care.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities 80 + Skills 18 (36 ranks) + Advantages 12 + Powers 125 + Defenses 13 = 248 / 248

Build Comments: Another of Geoff Johns’ genius creations for the GL-verse, Atrocitus, the leader of the Red Lantern Corps. He’s another example of a character that could be one note, but Johns made him more than that, giving a real reason for his boundless rage as well as showing that he is not beyond redemption. And over the years, he’s actually gotten some decent characterization as his grip on the leadership of the Red Lanterns has been taken from him for periods. But for now in the Thorpacoverse, he’s the leader and he and his Corps are tear-assin’ across the universe dispensing their own justice.

Secret Origins: The being known as Atrocitus, whose real name is Atros) was born on planet Ryut, and was a survivor of the infamous Massacre of Sector 666, during which the Manhunters wiped out the life in an entire space sector, including his wife and his daughter, except for five lifeforms. These five became the terrorists known as the Five Inversions, led by Atrocitus, and sought revenge against the Guardians of the Universe and gained powers through dark magics. Over time, they would build themselves a strong following of worshipers and become known as the Empire of Tears. When the Guardians decided to rid the universe of magic to make way for order, the Empire crumbled and the Five Inversions were imprisoned and crucified on the planet Ysmault to serve out a long sentence for the crimes they had committed. However, the demons were still far from powerless. Through rituals and sacrifices, they discovered a black power so dark it was beyond the power of the Guardians' light. This power would emanate from William Hand and lead to the Blackest Night.

The Story so Far: After the Sinestro Corps War years later, Atrocitus came to realize a new source of power that would grant not just an escape from Ysmault but his revenge, as well. Qull's blood would pay for it, because it was his manipulations of Abin Sur that led to the Five Inversions being left to rot on Ysmault rather than being transferred to Sciencells as was originally planned by the Guardians. Atrocitus bludgeoned Qull with a red lantern, christening it in blood and awakening the power of the Red Light of Rage.

Since then, the Red Light of Rage has shown throughout the universe, with Atrocitus leading the Red Lantern Corps.

Characterization: Atrocitus began as a brutish monster, but one with great love for his family and people. Then with the destruction the Manhunters brought to his planet of Ryut he became an enraged beast hell bent on vengeance. As the Leader of the Red Lantern Corps, he is still filled with feelings of vengeance and anger still but he has become more calculating and contemplative then his brutish former self. He now wants to bring justice and order to the universe through the power of rage and woe be until those that get in the way of him and his Corps.

Friends and Foes: Atrocitus has the loyalty of most of his Corps, but Bleez and a few others that have been given their intelligence back have chafed under his leadership at times. He has a great hatred for the Guardians of the Universe, along with Sinestro and his Corps, but he has worked with the other Corps, albeit reluctantly, during events like the Blackest Night where it was necessary for their survival.
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Sometimes amid the cacophony of rage comes a voice. A scream. It's the scream of the victim. Of the hurt. Of the worthy. - Atrocitus

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RED LANTERN (ATROCITUS)
PL10


OPL: 10; SPL: -; DPL: 10; FWPL: 10; HP: 1

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 7 [9], STAMINA 7 [9], AGILITY 0 [1], DEXTERITY 0, FIGHTING 5 [6], INTELLECT 1, AWARENESS 1, PRESENCE 0

SKILLS: Athletics (+9), Deception (+0), Expertise [Magic] 4 (+5), Insight (+1), Intimidation 9 (+9/+10), Perception (+1), Persuasion (+0), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 7 (+7), Stealth (+1/-1)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Benefit (1) (Status – Leader of the Red Lantern Corps), Close Attack (1), Diehard, Power Attack

POWERS:
Great Rage: Enhanced Fortitude 4 (Flaw: Limited to power ring effects); 2 pts
Atrocitus Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Red Lantern Power Ring: 101 pts Traits, Removable (-20 pts); 81 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Ring Flight: 22 pt Array; 23 pts
Flying: Flight 10 (2,000 mph/4 mpr), Movement 1 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G]); 22 pts
Space Travel: Movement 3 (Space Travel 3 [Any star system]); 1 pt
Force Field: Protection 5 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 8 (All Environmental Conditions, Suffocation, Disease); 13 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds); 3 pts
Mind of Rage: Immunity 10 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited to half-effect); 5 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Enhanced Fighting 1, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (All power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 17 pts
Red Light of Rage: 26 pt Array; 29 pts
Burning Blood: Acid Damage 8 (Extras: Reach 2 [10 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 26 pts
Claws of Rage: Slashing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 13 (Hard Light Constructs); 1 pt
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 13; 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +1
Close Attack +7 [Unarmed +9; Burning Blood +8]
Claws +9 [Claws +11, Critical 19-20]
Ranged Attack +0
Power Ring +7 [Fires of Rage +13; Rage Constructs +13]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +6 [DC16] Parry +6 [DC16]
Toughness +9 (+9 without Defensive Roll, +14 with Force Field), Fortitude +9 (+13 for Power Ring effects), Will +6

COMPLICATIONS:
Enemy: The Green Lantern Corps, but more the Guardians of the Universe themselves. He also has a hatred of Sinestro as well as the Manhunters.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. Unlike his fellow Red Lanterns, Atrocitus seems immune to the ring’s tendency to inspire mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects, not that Atrocitus seems to care.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities 34 + Skills 11 (22 ranks) + Advantages 5 + Powers 88 + Defenses 12 = 150 / 150

Build Comments: Big A as a PC.
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Re: J-Mart: Sinestro, Arkillo, Soranik Natu, Abin Sur, Kilowog, Atrocitus

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There is one member of the Red Lantern Corps I'd like to see here, please. Have this very unsubtle hint: Meow.
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Red Lantern (Dex-Starr): Earth-T1

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EternalPhoenix wrote: Wed Dec 14, 2022 6:58 pm There is one member of the Red Lantern Corps I'd like to see here, please. Have this very unsubtle hint: Meow.
Meow and ye shall receive. 8-)

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I kill. I good cat. - Dex-Starr

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RED LANTERN (DEX-STARR)
PL12


OPL: 12; SPL: 1; DPL: 11; FWPL: 9; HP: 1
Real Name: Dexter
Age: 5
Height: 1-6
Weight: 8
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: Blue
Skin: Pink
Race: Earth Cat
Identity: Public
Alignment: Neutral
Status: Active
Occupation: Red Lantern
Base of Operations: Ysmault
Team Affiliations: Red Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH -3 [-1], STAMINA -3 [-1], AGILITY 3 [4], DEXTERITY 0, FIGHTING 3 [7], INTELLECT -3, AWARENESS 2, PRESENCE -2

SKILLS: Acrobatics 3 (+7), Athletics (-1/+7), Close Combat [Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe] 4 (+11), Deception (-2/+10) [Taunt], Insight 3 (+5), Intimidation (-2/-6), Perception 3 (+5), Persuasion (-2), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 9 (+9), Stealth (+4/+12)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Evasion (1), Grabbing Finesse, Improved Initiative (1), Improved Trip, Power Attack (1) (Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe), Taunt

POWERS:
Rage Kitty: Enhanced Fortitude 12 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 6 pts
Cute Little Angry Blue Cat Size: Shrinking 8 (-2 Str, +4 Dodge/Parry, +8 Stealth, -4 Intimidation, Speed -2, -2 Mass; Extra: Innate); 17 pts
Cat Senses: Senses 5 (Low-Light Vision, Scent [Acute, Ranged], Normal Hearing [Extended], Ultra-Hearing); 5 pts
Aw…isn't he cute? Wait a minute…is he coughing up something…? AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!: Enhanced Skills 6 (Deception 12 ranks), Enhanced Advantages 1 (Taunt), (Flaw: Sense-Dependent [Visual]); 4 pts
Cat Class and Cat Style: Enhanced Skills 4 (Athletics 8 ranks, Flaw: Limited [climb checks only]), Speed 3 (16 [4] mph/250 [30] fpr), Movement 1 (Slow Fall, Flaw: Limited [half-effect]); 6 pts
Red Lantern Power Ring: 146 pts Traits, Removable (-29 pts); 117 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Red Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce partial concealment to none, total concealment to partial]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Fortitude [DC20 check] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 9 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 7 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 26 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 1 (1/every 9 rounds); 2 pts
Mindless Rage: Immunity 15 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited [half-effect], Interaction Effects); 10 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Enhanced Fighting 4, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (all power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 25 pts
Red Light of Rage: 30 pt Array; 33 pts
Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe: Acid Damage 9 (Extras: Reach 3 [15 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 30 pts
Claws of Rage: Multiattack Slashing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 15 (Force Objects); 1 pt
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 15; 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +8
Close Attack +7 [Unarmed -1; Claws of Rage +1, Critical 19-20, Multiattack]
Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe +11 [Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe +9]
Ranged Attack +0
Power Ring +9 [Fires of Kitty Rage +15; Rage Constructs Create +15]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +14 [DC24] Parry +14 [DC24]
Toughness -1 (+8 with Force Field, +4 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +3 (+15 for Power Ring effects), Will +4

COMPLICATIONS:
Disability: Dex-Starr can only speak short, non-complex sentences and he cannot use his paws for fine manipulation of objects.
Enemy: Krypto and Cosmo HATE him and Lockjaw isn't real fond of him either.
Motivation: Finding and killing the murderer of his owner.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Reputation: Nobody really trusts cats…
Responsibility: To shine the Red Light of Rage throughout Sector 2814.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. The ring also inspires mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities -4 + Skills 11 (22 ranks) + Advantages 6 + Powers 155 + Defenses 15 = 183 / 183

Build Comments: Perhaps…no, I take that back, there is no perhaps to this...THE most awesome Lantern creation that Geoff Johns produced in his epic Green Lantern run, Dex-Starr, the most vicious of all the Red Lanterns and one of the most feared creatures in the entire Thorpacoverse.

He was so much fun to build. He was apparently originally drawn as a joke by Shane Davis for one of the big War of Light splash panels that Johns wanted but after the good laugh, Johns decided to run with him and a legend was born. Those panels that show him all Puss in Boots cute, then puking that acid blood on people are some of the funniest things in comic history. Love him.

And I love that he is paired with Atrocitus in the Injustice 2 game where he’s zapping people from the ring on his tail. It’s too cute yet vicious!

Secret Origins: Dex-Starr's real name is Dexter and he was just an ordinary house cat from Earth. He was abandoned at and later adopted from the Brooklyn Animal Shelter. His new owner loved Dexter because he was always there to keep her company. One night someone broke into their home and Dexter scratched the burglar. As he screamed in pain, Dexter's owner woke up and called for help, but unfortunately help never arrived. The next day, two cops outside the apartment talked about how it was a burglary that went bad as Dexter sat outside the door and the fate of Dexter's owner is unknown.

Just then the cops kicked Dexter out saying that the cat could contaminate the scene (apparently unknowing that Dexter was a resident of the apartment). Dexter was left homeless for an unknown amount of time, living in a box on the street when two thugs called him out and bag him. To their amusement, they decided to throw Dexter (while still inside the bag) off the Brooklyn Bridge to see him drown. Just as they throw him to the river and discuss whether or not he will die on impact, a Red Power Ring flies in detecting the rage in his heart and turned him into a Red Lantern and thus embraced his new identity as Dex-Starr.

To this day he remembers his owner’s last kind words to him" "You make my life better you silly cat, and I know if you could talk, you would tell me the same thing." Dexter, having the red ring express his rage in coherent thoughts, vowed to find the person who hurt his owner and then kill him. Because he is a good kitty.

The Story so Far: As a member of the Red Lantern Corps, Dex-Starr has accompanied the Corps on many missions and has become one of the most feared members of their, or any Lantern Corps.

Characterization: Dex-Starr is one of the most malicious Red Lanterns.Dex-Starr's favorite tactic is to fly up, looking deceptively innocent and cute. With his opponent off-guard, he then spews energized blood.

Friends and Foes: He is one of Atrocitus’ closest confidants.
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Thorpocalypse wrote: Thu Dec 15, 2022 9:33 pm
Meow and ye shall receive. 8-)
Thanks. I really appreciate it, because
Thorpocalypse wrote: Thu Dec 15, 2022 9:33 pmBuild Comments: Perhaps…no, I take that back, there is no perhaps to this...THE most awesome Lantern creation that Geoff Johns produced in his epic Green Lantern run, Dex-Starr, the most vicious of all the Red Lanterns and one of the most feared creatures in the entire Thorpacoverse.
you're GOD. DAMN. RIGHT. Who's a good angry murder kitty? Yeah, it's you Dex-Starr. It's you.
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Re: Green Lantern (Kilowog): Earth-T1

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You're all just rookiees right now. Rookies who have all been chosen to serve, protect, and obey. You've been recruited like others have for millennia cuz you all have the potential ta overcome fear. After I'm finished with ya, some of you might do just that...and some of ya might be able to learn how to use those power rings. Some of you might even get to be one of the sventy two hundred who will protect the universe as agents of the Guardians of the Universe. Yep, some of you might become members of the Green Lantern Corps. Then again, some of you might not. Any questions? - Kilowog

GREEN LANTERN (KILOWOG)
PL13


OPL: 13 SPL: 5; DPL: 13; FWPL: 12; HP: 1
Real Name: Kilowog
Age: 250
Height: 8-3
Weight: 720
Eyes: Red
Hair: None
Skin: Pink
Race: Bolovax Vixian
Identity: Public
Alignment: Hero
Status: Active
Occupation: Green Lantern
Base of Operations: New Oa
Team Affiliations: Green Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 10, STAMINA 10, AGILITY 1, DEXTERITY 4, FIGHTING 9, INTELLECT 7, AWARENESS 3, PRESENCE 4

SKILLS: Athletics 3 (+13), Deception (+4), Expertise [Drill Instructor] 8 (+15), Expertise [Science] 6 (+13), Insight (+3), Intimidation 8 (+12/+13) [Daze, Startle], Investigation 2 (+9), Perception 4 (+7), Persuasion (+4), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 7 (+11), Stealth (+1/-1), Technology 6 (+13)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack (1) (Force Blast), Benefit (1) (Status – GL Corps Trainer), Close Attack (3), Daze (1) (Intimidation), Defensive Roll (1), Fearless, Improved Aim, Improved Initiative (1), Leadership, Power Attack (2) (Force Blast, Unarmed), Ultimate Effort (1) (Ultimate Fortitude Check)

POWERS:
Great Will: Enhanced Will 7 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 4 pts
Bolovakian Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Bolovakian Physiology: Features 2 (Longevity, Iron Stomach); 2 pts
Great Will: Enhanced Will 6 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 6 pts
Bolovakian Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Bolovakian Physiology: Features 2 (Longevity, Iron Stomach); 2 pts
Green Lantern Power Ring: 125 pts Traits, Removable (-25 pts); 100 pts
Attention Green Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Green Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Quick Change: Features 1 (Quick Change); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Scanning Beam: Variable 1 (5 pts traits, Extra: Action [Move], Flaw: Limited to Senses); 7 pts
Green Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce partial concealment to none, total concealment to partial]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Will [DC20] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 5 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 11 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 26 pts
Force Manipulation: 31 pt Dynamic Array; 41 pts
Force Blast: Ranged Force Energy Damage 15 (Extra: Dynamic); 31 pts
Force Constructs: Create 15 (Hard Light Constructs; Extra: Dynamic, movable); 2 pts
Force Lifting: Move Object 15 (Extra: Dynamic); 2 pts
Force Weapons: Strength-based Damage 4 (Extra: Dangerous, Dynamic, Penetrating, Variable Descriptor [Bludgeoning/Slashing/Piercing]), Enhanced Advantages 1 (Power Attack); 2 pts
Force Bubble: Ranged Burst Area Immunity 8 (All Environmental Conditions, Suffocation, Airborne Toxins, Extra: Affects Others, Dynamic, Burst Area [30 ft radius], Flaw: Affects others only); 2 pts
Mass Communication: Communication 5 (Subspace audiovisual projection; Any Distance, Extra: Dynamic, Selective); 2 pts


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +5
Close Attack +12 [Unarmed +10; Ring Weapons +14, Critical 19-20]
Ranged Attack +4
Power Ring +11 [Force Blast +15; Force Constructs Create +15; Force Lifting Move Objects +15]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +9 [DC19] Parry +10 [DC20]
Toughness +11 (+10 without Defensive Roll, +16 with Force Field, +6 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +10 (Ultimate Effort), Will +9 (+15 for Power Ring effects)

COMPLICATIONS:
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning as its power runs low.
Relationships: Despite being as hard on them as any drill sergeant in any galaxy, he would lay down his life in a second for his charges.
Responsibility: Training the Green Lantern Corps recruits.
Rivalry: Arkillo of the Sinestro Corps.
Weakness: Green Lantern power rings depend on the willpower of the wearer; the maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the wearer’s Will rank, and moments of self-doubt or hesitation can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities 88 + Skills 22 (44 ranks) + Advantages 14 + Powers 110 + Defenses 17 = 251 / 251

Build Comments: Look out Poozers! It’s the most well-known GL outside of the Earth GLs, Kilowog. He’s da bomb. I didn’t vary much from canon with this build, although I did kill off the super genius inventor stuff that he used to have since he is rarely portrayed that way anymore. He’s generally just the gruff, bad-ass GL trainer with a heart as big as Oa, and that’s how he is in my setting.

Secret Origins: Kilowog is from the planet Bolovax Vik in sector 674 where he was a genetic scientist. When he was recruited into the Green Lantern Corps he was trained by Lantern instructor, Ermey. It was from Ermey that Kilowog learned the phrase "Poozer" for a "useless rookie", a phrase Kilowog would become famous for when he himself would train future Lanterns. Ermey was killed while leading the rookie Lanterns, including Kilowog, in helping Lanterns who were under attack and losing power. Before he died, Ermey painted a Green Lantern symbol on Kilowog's chest, signifying that he was no longer a rookie and told him that he could be a leader in the future.

The Story so Far: Kilowog was originally at the bottom of his rookie class, but got better as time went on. He has since become a leader of the Corps, replacing Ermey has drill sergeant and has trained and mentored scores of Green Lanterns over the years. He has also been on the front lines in many of the most significant events in Green Lantern Corps history, like Hal Jordan’s possession by Parallax, the Sinestro Corps Wars, the Blackest Night and the Rise of the Third Army.

Characterization: Kilowog is known by all Green Lanterns as a tough drill sargent. This is evidenced by Kilowog adopting much of his style from his mentor, who just so happens to be named Ermey. He talks down to new recruits by calling them poozers (essentially meaning rookie), a word which he has become famous for using.

Kilowog is not just a tough teacher but is also often provides comic relief. In this sense, Kilowog is seen as the lovable oaf. But considering his strength and temper, he still is not one to be bullied or messed with. In the field, Kilowog is often shown as one of the most powerful Green Lanterns. He is a heavy hitter for the Corps. Not only this, but he is also a very skilled leader during battles and crisis situations.

Friends and Foes: After the death of his first Teacher He became a close friend of Sinestro up until his betrayal. As Time went on Kilowog became more attached to the rookies he taught to the point where he stepped down from his trainer role for a while as he could no longer train them for fear of them dying. He has since returned to his role.

He has also grown more attached to the Green Lanterns of Earth, especially Guy Gardner. He has a heated rivalry with Arkillo of the Sinestro Corps.
Nice build, much better than horrible official one. He has 6 dodge and 20 toughness there, higher than Superman's and Darkseid's. :D It is also a nice touch that he can utilize his high strength with force weapons too.
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Red Lantern (Dex-Starr): Earth-PC1

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RED LANTERN (DEX-STARR)
PL10


OPL: 10; SPL: 1; DPL: 10; FWPL: 9; HP: 1

ABILITIES: STRENGTH -2 [0], STAMINA -3 [-1], AGILITY 3 [4], DEXTERITY 0, FIGHTING 3 [4], INTELLECT -3, AWARENESS 2, PRESENCE -2

SKILLS: Acrobatics 1 (+5), Athletics (+0), Deception (-2/+10) [Taunt], Insight 3 (+5), Intimidation (-2/-6), Perception 3 (+5), Persuasion (-2), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 7 (+7), Stealth (+4/+12)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Close Attack (8), Improved Trip, Power Attack, Taunt

POWERS:
Rage Kitty: Enhanced Fortitude 10 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 5 pts
Cute Little Angry Blue Cat Size: Shrinking 8 (-2 Str, +4 Dodge/Parry, +8 Stealth, -4 Intimidation, Speed -2, -2 Mass; Extra: Innate); 17 pts
Cat Senses: Senses 5 (Low-Light Vision, Scent [Acute, Ranged], Normal Hearing [Extended], Ultra-Hearing); 5 pts
Aw…isn't he cute? Wait a minute…is he coughing up something…? AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!: Enhanced Skills 6 (Deception 12 ranks), Enhanced Advantages 1 (Taunt), (Flaw: Sense-Dependent [Visual]); 4 pts
Cat Class and Cat Style: Enhanced Skills 4 (Athletics 8 ranks, Flaw: Limited [climb checks only]), Speed 3 (16 [4] mph/250 [30] fpr), Movement 1 (Slow Fall, Flaw: Limited [half-effect]); 6 pts
Red Lantern Power Ring: 103 pts Traits, Removable (-21 pts); 82 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Ring Flight: 22 pt Array; 23 pts
Flying: Flight 10 (2,000 mph/4 mpr), Movement 1 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G]); 22 pts
Space Travel: Movement 3 (Space Travel 3 [Any star system]); 1 pt
Force Field: Protection 7 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 8 (All Environmental Conditions, Suffocation, Disease); 15 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds); 3 pts
Mind of Rage: Immunity 10 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited to half-effect); 5 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Enhanced Fighting 1, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (All power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 17 pts
Red Light of Rage: 26 pt Array; 29 pts
Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe: Acid Damage 8 (Extras: Reach 2 [10 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 26 pts
Claws of Rage: Slashing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 13 (Hard Light Constructs); 1 pt
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 13; 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +4
Close Attack +12 [Unarmed +0; Claws of Rage +2, Critical 19-20; Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe +8]
Ranged Attack +0
Power Ring +7 [Fires of Kitty Rage +13; Rage Constructs Create +13]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +14 [DC24] Parry +14 [DC24]
Toughness -1 (-1 without Defensive Roll, +6 with Force Field), Fortitude +3 (+13 for Power Ring effects), Will +4

COMPLICATIONS:
Disability: Dex-Starr can only speak short, non-complex sentences and he cannot use his paws for fine manipulation of objects.
Enemy: Krypto and Cosmo HATE him and Lockjaw isn't real fond of him either.
Motivation: Finding and killing the murderer of his owner.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Reputation: Nobody really trusts cats…
Responsibility: To shine the Red Light of Rage throughout Sector 2814.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. The ring also inspires mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities -4 + Skills 7 (14 ranks) + Advantages 11 + Powers 119 + Defenses 17 = 150 / 150

Build Comments: The scariest PC in the universe.
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Red Lantern (Dex-Starr): Earth-???

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