Hi guys. Been going over the builds and backgrounds, and have a few things that stick out that I wanted to bring up to talk about them
Doc and Fynn, both your characters are sound and I dont see much issues with the powers, perhaps the only conflict would be with the healing salve and Hamas healing power, not that you cannot overlap, but perhaps either of you might want to switch to a more useful thing given that the other has that cover already.
Which takes us to Hama, Nunya you made a very nice work with her, but her healing power seems waay too powerful for the setting, and she does seem the kind of person that wouldnt worry too much about healing but damaging heh. So perhaps you could drop it in favour of something else?
Mancys archer is pretty straight forward, I like the fact that he is born in the lowest classes and has risen to an elite retainer. After youve incorporated all the mechanic corrections (thanks guys for the heavy lifting there!) I would have no other issues.
McGuffin Kuro needs to be fleshed out before I can review it. Also, is this an image of what you had in mind?
On other news the first post was updated with links to the submissions