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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula

Post by Batgirl III » Mon May 28, 2018 11:59 pm

HalloweenJack wrote:
Mon May 28, 2018 11:36 pm
I enjoy Ms. Gillan out of the Nebula make up very much.....but her IN THE MAKE-UP...jeeeeez I'm so into her like that.


That scene in GOTG Vol.2 where Yondu says "This will hurt" and she grins "Promise, promises".....HNNNNNSSSSK....MOANZ.....MGM cartoon Wolf howling
Oh, good. I’m not the only person that had that reaction.

I’ll have someone to keep me company in the special hell. 😉
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341 - Red Lantern Atrocitus

Post by Thorpocalypse » Tue May 29, 2018 12:08 am

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Pity is weak. Pity is failure. What is pity... compared WITH RAGE? - Red Lantern Atrocitus

RED LANTERN (ATROCITUS)
PL13


OPL: 13; SPL: -; DPL: 13; FWPL: 13; HP: 1
Real Name: Atros
Age: Unknown
Height: 7-8
Weight: 500
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: None
Skin: Red
Race: Ryutian
Identity: Public
Alignment: Neutral
Status: Active
Occupation: Red Lantern Leader
Base of Operations: Ysmault
Team Affiliations: Red Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 8 [12], STAMINA 8 [11], AGILITY 2 [3], DEXTERITY 2, FIGHTING 11, INTELLECT 2, AWARENESS 3, PRESENCE 5

SKILLS: Athletics 3 (+15), Deception (+5), Expertise [Cosmic Lore] 8 (+10), Expertise [Magic] 8 (+10) [Ritualist], Insight (+3), Intimidation 9 (+14/+15), Perception (+3), Persuasion (+5), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 8 (+10), Stealth (+3/+1)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Benefit (1) (Status – Leader of the Red Lantern Corps), Diehard, Last Stand*, Leadership, Power Attack (4) (Burning Blood, Claws, Fires of Rage, Unarmed), Ritualist

POWERS:
Great Rage: Enhanced Fortitude 4 (Flaw: Limited to power ring effects); 2 pts
Atrocitus Size: Growth 2 (+2 Str, +2 Sta, -1 Dodge/Parry, -2 Stealth, +1 Intimidation, Speed +0, +2 Mass; Extra: Innate, Permanent); 5 pts
Claws: Slashing/Piercing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 4 pts
Iron Stomach: Feature 1 (Iron Stomach); 1 pt
Red Lantern Power Ring: 140 pts Traits, Removable (-28 pts); 112 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Red Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce total concealment to partial and partial concealment to none]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Fortitude [DC20 check] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 5 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 13 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 28 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds); 3 pts
Mind of Rage: Immunity 10 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited [half-effect]); 5 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (All power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 17 pts
Red Light of Rage: 33 pt Array; 37 pts
Burning Blood: Acid Damage 10 (Extras: Reach 3 [15 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 33 pts
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 16; 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 16 (Hard Light Constructs); 1 pt
Rage Infection: Perception Range Affliction 10 (Mental; 1st: Dazed, 2nd: Compelled, 3rd: Mentally Transformed [into being of rage]); 1 pt
Mass Communication: Communication 5 (Subspace audiovisual projection, Any Distance, Extra: Dynamic, Selective); 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +3
Close Attack +11 [Unarmed +12; Claws +14, Critical 19-20; Burning Blood +10]
Ranged Attack +2
Power Ring +10 [Fires of Rage +16; Rage Constructs +16]
Special Attack [Rage Infection Affliction +10, Perception]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +8 [DC18] Parry +10 [DC20]
Toughness +11 (+11 without Defensive Roll, +16 with Force Field, +7 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +12 (+16 for Power Ring effects), Will +9

COMPLICATIONS:
Enemy: The Green Lantern Corps, but more the Guardians of the Universe themselves. He also has a hatred of Sinestro as well as the Manhunters.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. Unlike his fellow Red Lanterns, Atrocitus seems immune to the ring’s tendency to inspire mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects, not that Atrocitus seems to care.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities 80 + Skills 18 (36 ranks) + Advantages 10 + Powers 124 + Defenses 13 = 245 / 245

Build Comments: Another of Geoff Johns’ genius creations for the GL-verse, Atrocitus, the leader of the Red Lantern Corps. He’s another example of a character that could be one note, but Johns made him more than that, giving a real reason for his boundless rage as well as showing that he is not beyond redemption. And over the years, he’s actually gotten some decent characterization as his grip on the leadership of the Red Lanterns has been taken from him for periods. But for now in the Thorpacoverse, he’s back as the leader and he and his Corps are tear-assin’ across the universe dispensing their own justice.

Secret Origins: The being known as Atrocitus, whose real name is Atros, was born on planet Ryut, and was a survivor of the infamous Massacre of Sector 666, during which the Manhunters wiped out the life in an entire space sector, including his wife and his daughter, except for five lifeforms. These five became the terrorists known as the Five Inversions, led by Atrocitus, and sought revenge against the Guardians of the Universe and gained powers through dark magics. Over time, they would build themselves a strong following of worshipers and become known as the Empire of Tears. When the Guardians decided to rid the universe of magic to make way for order, the Empire crumbled and the Five Inversions were imprisoned and crucified on the planet Ysmault to serve out a long sentence for the crimes they had committed. However, the demons were still far from powerless. Through rituals and sacrifices, they discovered a black power so dark it was beyond the power of the Guardians' light. This power would emanate from William Hand and lead to the Blackest Night.

The Story so Far: After the Sinestro Corps War years later, Atrocitus came to realize a new source of power that would grant not just an escape from Ysmault but his revenge, as well. Qull's blood would pay for it, because it was his manipulations of Abin Sur that led to the Five Inversions being left to rot on Ysmault rather than being transferred to Sciencells as was originally planned by the Guardians. Atrocitus bludgeoned Qull with a red lantern, christening it in blood and awakening the power of the Red Light of Rage.

Since then, the Red Light of Rage has shown throughout the universe, with Atrocitus leading the Red Lantern Corps.

Characterization: Atrocitus began as a brutish monster, but one with great love for his family and people. Then with the destruction the Manhunters brought to his planet of Ryut he became an enraged beast hell bent on vengeance. As the Leader of the Red Lantern Corps, he is still filled with feelings of vengeance and anger still but he has become more calculating and contemplative then his brutish former self. He now wants to bring justice and order to the universe through the power of rage and woe be until those that get in the way of him and his Corps.

Friends and Foes: Atrocitus has the loyalty of most of his Corps, but Bleez and a few others that have been given their intelligence back have chafed under his leadership at times. He has a great hatred for the Guardians of the Universe, along with Sinestro and his Corps, but he has worked with the other Corps, albeit reluctantly, during events like the Blackest Night where it was necessary for their survival.

His closest and most feared ally is his cat, Dex-Starr.

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula

Post by Thorpocalypse » Tue May 29, 2018 12:32 am

Batgirl III wrote:
Mon May 28, 2018 11:59 pm
HalloweenJack wrote:
Mon May 28, 2018 11:36 pm
I enjoy Ms. Gillan out of the Nebula make up very much.....but her IN THE MAKE-UP...jeeeeez I'm so into her like that.


That scene in GOTG Vol.2 where Yondu says "This will hurt" and she grins "Promise, promises".....HNNNNNSSSSK....MOANZ.....MGM cartoon Wolf howling
Oh, good. I’m not the only person that had that reaction.

I’ll have someone to keep me company in the special hell. 😉
I heard her say that she based her Nebula voice as an impression of Marilyn Monroe channeling Clint Eastwood so I think you're justified in your giggity for her in those situations. :)

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula

Post by HalloweenJack » Tue May 29, 2018 12:38 am

Batgirl III wrote:
Mon May 28, 2018 11:59 pm
HalloweenJack wrote:
Mon May 28, 2018 11:36 pm
I enjoy Ms. Gillan out of the Nebula make up very much.....but her IN THE MAKE-UP...jeeeeez I'm so into her like that.


That scene in GOTG Vol.2 where Yondu says "This will hurt" and she grins "Promise, promises".....HNNNNNSSSSK....MOANZ.....MGM cartoon Wolf howling
Oh, good. I’m not the only person that had that reaction.

I’ll have someone to keep me company in the special hell. 😉
Rockin'.

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus

Post by Jabroniville » Tue May 29, 2018 6:32 am

Nice stuff! You and your random uploading schedule always gives me a big backlog to read through at once :).

Gillen's a cutie, but I was never really into Bald Cyborg Nebula. I think mechanical parts are kind of a dealbreaker. Also, I'd look crazy-weird going out with a bald chick, since I shave my head, too :).

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus

Post by BriarThrone » Tue May 29, 2018 9:22 am

I'm not especially into the Nebula look, compared to how much I lust after the lady in her ordinary hot-redhead look. Mind you, on a scale of 1-10, that still leaves Nebula at around a 27.

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus

Post by Ken » Tue May 29, 2018 2:29 pm

Ms. Gillan has been getting a special reaction in my -um- sonic screwdriver since 2010 and she started on Doctor Who.

Pre-Doctor Who
After his success co-authoring a murder mystery w/James Patterson, Marvel is now talking to Bill Clinton about doing some comics writing: a revival of Steve Gerber's swamp monster hero. They expect Bill Clinton's 'Man-Thing' will be very popular.

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus

Post by HalloweenJack » Tue May 29, 2018 9:24 pm

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342 - Red Lantern Dex-Starr

Post by Thorpocalypse » Wed May 30, 2018 3:32 am

We're continuing to roam the Cosmic Thorpocaverse and we've got another RED LIGHT SPECIAL! Check out this top selling J-Mart Favorite Item on Aisle 1!

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Oh lord, whoever zapped him is so f***ed!!!

RED LANTERN (DEX-STARR)
PL12


OPL: 12; SPL: -; DPL: 11; FWPL: 9; HP: 1
Real Name: Dexter
Age: 3
Height: 1-6
Weight: 11
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: Blue
Skin: Pink
Race: Earth Cat
Identity: Public
Alignment: Neutral
Status: Active
Occupation: Red Lantern
Base of Operations: Ysmault
Team Affiliations: Red Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH -3 [-1], STAMINA -3 [-1], AGILITY 3 [4], DEXTERITY 0, FIGHTING 3 [7], INTELLECT -3, AWARENESS 2, PRESENCE -2

SKILLS: Acrobatics 3 (+7), Athletics (-1/+7), Close Combat [Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe] 4 (+11), Deception (-2/+10) [Taunt], Insight 3 (+5), Intimidation (-2/-6), Perception 3 (+5), Persuasion (-2), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 9 (+9), Stealth (+4/+12)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Evasion (1), Grabbing Finesse, Improved Initiative (1), Improved Trip, Power Attack (1) (Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe), Taunt

POWERS:
Rage Kitty: Enhanced Fortitude 12 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 6 pts
Cute Little Angry Blue Cat Size: Shrinking 8 (-2 Str, +4 Dodge/Parry, +8 Stealth, -4 Intimidation, Speed -2, -2 Mass; Extra: Innate); 17 pts
Cat Senses: Senses 5 (Low-Light Vision, Scent [Acute, Ranged], Normal Hearing [Extended], Ultra-Hearing); 5 pts
Aw…isn't he cute? Wait a minute…is he coughing up something…? AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!: Enhanced Skills 6 (Deception 12 ranks), Enhanced Advantages 1 (Taunt), (Flaw: Sense-Dependent [Visual]); 4 pts
Cat Class and Cat Style: Enhanced Skills 4 (Athletics 8 ranks, Flaw: Limited [climb checks only]), Speed 3 (16 [4] mph/250 [30] fpr), Movement 1 (Slow Fall, Flaw: Limited [half-effect]); 6 pts
Red Lantern Power Ring: 146 pts traits, Removable (-29 pts); 117 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Red Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce partial concealment to none, total concealment to partial]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Fortitude [DC20 check] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 9 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 7 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 26 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 1 (1/every 9 rounds); 2 pts
Mindless Rage: Immunity 15 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited [half-effect], Interaction Effects); 10 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 2, Enhanced Stamina 2, Enhanced Agility 1, Enhanced Fighting 4, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (all power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 25 pts
Red Light of Rage: 30 pt Array; 33 pts
Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe: Acid Damage 9 (Extras: Reach 3 [15 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 30 pts
Claws of Rage: Strength-based Multiattack Slashing Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 15 (Force Objects); 1 pt
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 15; 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +8
Close Attack +7 [Unarmed -1; Claws of Rage +1, Critical 19-20, Multiattack]
Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe +11 [Nastiest Hairballs in the Universe +9]
Ranged Attack +0
Power Ring +9 [Fires of Kitty Rage +15; Rage Constructs +15]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +14 [DC24] Parry +14 [DC24]
Toughness -1 (+8 with Force Field, +4 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +3 (+15 for Power Ring effects), Will +4

COMPLICATIONS:
Disability: Dex-Starr can only speak short, non-complex sentences and he cannot use his paws for fine manipulation of objects.
Enemy: Krypto and Cosmo HATE him and Lockjaw isn't real fond of him either.
Motivation: Finding and killing the murderer of his owner.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Reputation: Nobody really trusts cats…
Responsibility: To shine the Red Light of Rage throughout Sector 2814.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. The ring also inspires mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities -4 + Skills 11 (22 ranks) + Advantages 6 + Powers 155 + Defenses 15 = 183 / 183

Build Comments: Perhaps…no, I take that back, there is no perhaps to this...THE most awesome Lantern creation that Geoff Johns produced in his epic Green Lantern run, Dex-Starr. Larfleeze is close, but no one tops the Rage Kitty. He's one of the most vicious of all the Red Lanterns and one of the most feared creatures in the entire Thorpocaverse, maybe even over Squirrel Girl. ;)

He was so much fun to build. He was apparently originally drawn as a joke by Shane Davis for one of the big War of Light splash panels that Johns wanted but after the good laugh, Johns decided to run with an origin story for him and a legend was born. Those panels that show him all Puss in Boots cute, then puking that acid blood on people are some of the funniest things in comic history. Love him.

And I love that he is paired with Atrocitus in the Injustice 2 game where he’s zapping people from the ring on his tail. It’s too cute yet vicious!

Secret Origins: Dex-Starr's real name is Dexter and he was just an ordinary house cat from Earth. He was abandoned at and later adopted from the Brooklyn Animal Shelter. His new owner loved Dexter because he was always there to keep her company. One night someone broke into their home and Dexter scratched the burglar. As he screamed in pain, Dexter's owner woke up and called for help, but unfortunately help never arrived. The next day, two cops outside the apartment talked about how it was a burglary that went bad as Dexter sat outside the door and the fate of Dexter's owner is unknown.

Just then the cops kicked Dexter out saying that the cat could contaminate the scene (apparently unknowing that Dexter was a resident of the apartment). Dexter was left homeless for an unknown amount of time, living in a box on the street when two thugs called him out and bag him. To their amusement, they decided to throw Dexter (while still inside the bag) off the Brooklyn Bridge to see him drown. Just as they throw him to the river and discuss whether or not he will die on impact, a Red Power Ring flies in detecting the rage in his heart and turned him into a Red Lantern and thus embraced his new identity as Dex-Starr.

To this day he remembers his owner’s last kind words to him" "You make my life better you silly cat, and I know if you could talk, you would tell me the same thing." Dexter, having the red ring express his rage in coherent thoughts, vowed to find the person who hurt his owner and then kill him. Because he is a good kitty.

The Story so Far: As a member of the Red Lantern Corps, Dex-Starr has accompanied the Corps on many missions and has become one of the most feared members of their, or any Lantern Corps.

Characterization: Dex-Starr is one of the most malicious Red Lanterns. Dex-Starr's favorite tactic is to fly up, looking deceptively innocent and cute. With his opponent off-guard, he then spews energized blood.

Friends and Foes: He is one of Atrocitus’ closest confidants.

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus, Dex-Starr

Post by Skaramine » Wed May 30, 2018 3:59 am

The best Lantern I ever wanna play.

Thanks for this Cosmic Kitty!

Thank all of you for saying things about Ms. Gillan and Nebula that I would have been FAR more crude saying.
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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus, Dex-Starr

Post by Batgirl III » Wed May 30, 2018 4:22 am

I swear on my favorite batarang, I got all misty eyed the first time I read Dex-Starr’s origin story. He’s a good kitty.
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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus, Dex-Starr

Post by MacynSnow » Wed May 30, 2018 4:34 am

Batgirl III wrote:
Wed May 30, 2018 4:22 am
I swear on my favorite batarang, I got all misty eyed the first time I read Dex-Starr’s origin story. He’s a good kitty.
While i feel sorry for what happened to Dex,i still perfer Dogs.*goes over and starts petting Lockjaw*

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Re: J-Mart: Chitauri, Outriders, Nebula, Ronan the Accuser, Atrocitus, Dex-Starr

Post by Jabroniville » Wed May 30, 2018 5:41 am

Dex-Starr is amazing and pure "Comics Joy" personified. Embrace the silliness without going TOO far over the line (particularly by making the cute blue kitty a homicidal murderer), and you have magic.

Johns's run got spectacularly bad near the end, but holy cow was he "on" at one point.

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Re: 341 - Red Lantern Atrocitus

Post by Bladewind » Wed May 30, 2018 7:42 pm

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343 - Red Lantern Bleez

Post by Thorpocalypse » Thu May 31, 2018 3:35 am

Our last RED LIGHT SPECIAL for now keeps us out in the Cosmic Thorpocaverse! Check it out on Aisle 1!

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Rage. Bleez no longer knows freedom. Nor pain. But she will always know rage. Because hate creates hate. And that is its true power. - Red Lantern Atrocitus

RED LANTERN (BLEEZ)
PL12


OPL: 12; SPL: –; DPL: 12; FWPL: 11; HP: 1
Real Name: Bleez
Age: Unknown
Height: 5-8
Weight: 130
Eyes: Yellow
Hair: Black
Skin: Blue
Race: Havanian
Identity: Public
Alignment: Neutral
Status: Active
Occupation: Red Lantern
Base of Operations: Ysmault
Team Affiliations: Red Lantern Corps

ABILITIES: STRENGTH 1 [8], STAMINA 3 [8], AGILITY 3 [5], DEXTERITY 3, FIGHTING 5 [10], INTELLECT 2, AWARENESS 2, PRESENCE 3

SKILLS: Acrobatics 4 (+9), Athletics 2 (+10), Close Combat [Claws] 1 (+14), Deception 4 (+7), Insight (+2), Intimidation 6 (+9), Perception 4 (+6), Persuasion 6 (+9), Ranged Combat [Power Ring] 7 (+10), Stealth (+5)

ADVANTAGES: All-Out Attack, Close Attack (3), Favored Environment (Flying), Improved Initiative (1), Last Stand*, Power Attack (3) (Claws of Rage, Fires of Rage, Unarmed)

POWERS:
Great Rage: Enhanced Fortitude 5 (Flaw: Limited to Power Ring effects); 3 pts
Broken Wings: Piercing Strength-based Damage 1 (Extra: Reach 2 [10 ft], Split); 4 pts
Red Lantern Power Ring: 159 pts Traits, Removable (-32 pts); 127 pts
Attention Red Lantern...: Features 2 (A.I. and Red Lantern Corps Database); 2 pts
Communication: Senses 1 (Communication Link to Central Power Battery); 1 pt
Universal Translator: Comprehend 4 (Speak, Read, Understand, Understood in All Languages); 8 pts
Red Lantern's Light: Environment 2 (60 ft radius; Light [reduce partial concealment to none, total concealment to partial]); 2 pts
Ring Flight: Flight 14 (32,000 mph/60 mpr), Movement 4 (Environment Adaptation [Zero G], Space Travel 3 [Any star system]), Feature 1 (Use Fortitude [DC20 check] to increase Flight speed instead of Athletics); 37 pts
Force Field: Protection 4 (Flaw: Sustained), Impervious Toughness 9 (Flaw: Sustained), Immunity 10 (Life Support); 23 pts
Heartless: Feature 1 (Heart and other vital organs not critical to survival), Regeneration 2 (1/every 5 rounds); 3 pts
Mind of Rage: Immunity 10 (Mental Effects, Flaw: Limited to half-effect); 5 pts
Power of Rage: Enhanced Strength 7, Enhanced Stamina 5, Enhanced Agility 2, Enhanced Fighting 5, Senses 4 (Detect Rage [Mental; Ranged, Acute, Extended], Feature 3 (All power rings except Blue Rings lose charge faster when defending against Red Power Ring effects); 45 pts
Red Light of Rage: 30 pt Array; 33 pts
Burning Blood: Acid Damage 9 (Extras: Reach 3 [15 ft], Duration [Sustained, extinguished by a cessation of rage or the Blue Light of Hope]); 30 pts
Claws of Rage: Slashing Strength-based Damage 2 (Extra: Dangerous, Split); 1 pt
Rage Constructs: Create 14 (Hard Light Constructs); 1 pt
Fires of Rage: Ranged Fire Damage 14; 1 pt


EQUIPMENT:
NONE

OFFENSE:
Initiative +9
Close Attack +13 [Unarmed +8; Wing Strike +9; Burning Blood +9]
Claws +14 [3laws of Rage +10, Critical 19-20]
Ranged Attack +3
Power Ring +10 [Rage Constructs Create +14; Fires of Rage +14]

DEFENSES:
Dodge +12 [DC22] Parry +11 [DC21]
Toughness +8 (+12 with Force Field, +5 Impervious with Force Field), Fortitude +9 (+13 for Power Ring Effects), Will +7

COMPLICATIONS:
Hatred: She hates the Sinestro Corps for what they did to her.
Power Loss: The power ring needs periodic recharging and issues a warning when its power runs low.
Responsibility: To shine the Red Light of Rage throughout Sector 0033.
Servant of Rage: Red Lanterns cannot remove their ring without risking death. The ring also inspires mindless rage in its bearer. The light of a Blue Lantern ring can help counteract these effects.
Weakness: Red Lantern Corps power rings depend on the ability of the wielders to feel rage. The maximum rank of the ring’s effects is equal to the user’s Fortitude Rank to reflect the being’s capacity for raw fury. Calming thoughts and hopeful feelings, such as those inspired by the Blue Lanterns, can cause the ring to fail.

Abilities 44 + Skills 17 (34 ranks) + Advantages 9 + Powers 134 + Defenses 14 = 218 / 218

Build Comments: Similar to Dex-Starr, Bleez has a sad backstory in DC canon that I am carrying forward. During the Sinestro Corps War, she was one of many people captured by the Sinestro Corps for torture and "amusement". Held on Ranx the Sentient City, she was raped and tortured by the Sinestro Corps, but somehow managed to escape before Ranx was destroyed. Filled with rage over her mistreatment, Bleez was inducted into the Red Lantern Corps. She's another of Atrocitus' best engines of destruction.

Secret Origins: On her home planet of Havania, Bleez belonged to a race of beings who could fly and were thus considered to be superior to the other races of this planet. Havania's beauty was also renowned within her system and seven others, being second only to Odym. Because of this, and her aristocratic heritage, Bleez was sought after by many suitors from numerous solar systems. However, Bleez was more than disinterested in any suitor who knew of her since she felt that their only intention was to simply claim her famed beauty. As a result, Bleez refused to see anyone who came to pursue her, although this was much to her mother's behest, who longed for a grandchild in order to continue their family's legacy. However, when a tall and powerful suitor ventured to Havania during the course of the Sinestro Corps War, he killed Bleez's mother and took Bleez captive, making her a slave on the sentient city, Ranx, which was used both as a base and training ground for Sinestro's soldiers. Bleez was gang-raped on Ranx by the Sinestro Corpsmen, and her so-called suitor and he soon permanently disabled her wings as punishment for her arrogance over those who could not fly.

While aboard Ranx during the battle against the Green Lantern Corps above Mogo, Bleez attempted to commit suicide when she jumped out into space through a hole in the side of Ranx, preferring death over a life of slavery. However, her captor would not allow her to die so easily and forced Bleez to kiss him, claiming he wanted "more" from her before he would let her go. Bleez's rage filled heart summoned a red power ring to her location, making her the Red Lantern of Sector 33. After her transformation, she unleashed her rage upon her captor, killing the Sinistro Corps member of Sector 465. Because of her boundless rage at her captor and the Sinestro Corps in general, Bleez became a member of the Red Lantern Corps and joined the rest of her newly formed Corps who were gathered on Ysmault, after their leader Atrocitus rallied them together.

The Story so Far: During her time in Emerald Warriors, she was temporarily granted lucidity by a Blue Lantern, and is thus able to generally communicate besides growling and snarling. Recently, she has been freed from the influence of the rage after Atrocitus forced her to face her anger in the Ocean of Blood. Since then, a more distinct personality has started to bleed through, showing her to be arrogant, intelligent, spiteful, and ruthless. Despite acting as his second-in-command, she makes it very clear that she considers herself a stronger leader than Atrocitus, and openly plots for his position among the Corps. Nonetheless, other Red Lanterns respect and fear her. Bleez is also the only prominent female member of the Red Lantern Corps.

Characterization: Bleez has been shown to be a vicious and recently, ambitious member of the Red Lantern Corps. Her charisma has led a number of the Corps be to loyal to her.

Friends and Foes: She seemed to form a bond with Fatality while she was part of the New Guardians and despite their differences, she remains loyal to Atrocitus.
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